Rus_R, попробуйте уменьшить кол-во или обыграть как обойтись без слова that.
В conclusion, я бы заменил therefore на что-нибудь более подходящее (to sum up, in conclusion etc).
В основных параграфах как-то мудренно
..it is becoming very popular - может лучше has become / has been becoming..
...it is very convenient to have this type of education as a person can decide by themselves what schedule they will have..я бы написал так This kind of study is convenient for students who prefer to manage their time..
В conclusion, я бы заменил therefore на что-нибудь более подходящее (to sum up, in conclusion etc).
В основных параграфах как-то мудренно
..it is becoming very popular - может лучше has become / has been becoming..
...it is very convenient to have this type of education as a person can decide by themselves what schedule they will have..я бы написал так This kind of study is convenient for students who prefer to manage their time..
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