Покритикуйте,только не сильно :)

[Yevgeniya]

The night will come
But still the daylight
And all the other trifles
Are filling all my mind,
Erasing your frail image
For now...but soon
The night will come
And nothing will prevent my feelings
My thoughts about your eyes -
So deep and so mysterious...



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[Батька]

Re: Покритикуйте,только не сильно

The night will come
But still the daylight
And all the other trifles
Are filling all my mind,
Erasing your frail image
For now...but soon
The night will come
And nothing will prevent my feelings
My thoughts about your eyes -
So deep and so mysterious...



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но нипаньатна!