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Сегодня я написала первое письмо в процессе моей подготовки к тесту. Писала я его минут 40 
может для первого раза вполне нормально? Скажите, я в том стиле держусь, что надо?и насколько такое можно оценить? Обещаю, не публиковать свои дальнейшие письма, просто это мой первенец!
You live in a room in college, which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college.Describe the situation. Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work. Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to draw your attention to the problem I have. I am a third year student in our college. In our campus I share a room with a student, and this fact makes my studying impossible.
As you know this year is very difficult in college, we study the most difficult subjects and prepare ourselves to the future career. As a consequence, it is necessary for me to study hard to prepare for the lectures and to get good grades in the end of the year. It is not possible for me to do it as my neighbor is a very hospitable person and almost every evening during the week we have guests. It does bother me and doesn’t let me concentrate on my diploma work.
We also have different opinions about spending week-ends. I need to sleep enough to feel myself good and prefer quiet rest, such as reading books, or working on the computer. At the same time my neighbor likes to listen loud music or watch TV, which doesn’t allow me to have enough rest and to prepare myself to the working week.
With regard to all this facts, I would like to ask you about removing me in a single room, where I will have chance to study in the evenings and have a good rest on the week-ends.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Patricia.
может для первого раза вполне нормально? Скажите, я в том стиле держусь, что надо?и насколько такое можно оценить? Обещаю, не публиковать свои дальнейшие письма, просто это мой первенец!You live in a room in college, which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college.Describe the situation. Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work. Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to draw your attention to the problem I have. I am a third year student in our college. In our campus I share a room with a student, and this fact makes my studying impossible.
As you know this year is very difficult in college, we study the most difficult subjects and prepare ourselves to the future career. As a consequence, it is necessary for me to study hard to prepare for the lectures and to get good grades in the end of the year. It is not possible for me to do it as my neighbor is a very hospitable person and almost every evening during the week we have guests. It does bother me and doesn’t let me concentrate on my diploma work.
We also have different opinions about spending week-ends. I need to sleep enough to feel myself good and prefer quiet rest, such as reading books, or working on the computer. At the same time my neighbor likes to listen loud music or watch TV, which doesn’t allow me to have enough rest and to prepare myself to the working week.
With regard to all this facts, I would like to ask you about removing me in a single room, where I will have chance to study in the evenings and have a good rest on the week-ends.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Patricia.
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