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Some schools ask the students to wear the students uniforms. Some think it has some disadvantages to the development of the students' characters. Do you agree or disagree? Give the reasons for your reasons.
It is quite common nowadays that many schools demand wearing a uniform from their students. And it is evident that at the same time that not every student enjoys having it on and, moreover, there are some who think it may be not only just uncomfortable but even dangerous for a young individual’s character. In my opinion, wearing a school uniform seems not to have anything common with the development of a person’s character and, in the contrary, may even help to make children more disciplined and socially organized. Let me explain why.
Firstly, such thing as a uniform helps better consider the seriousness of the process of study. A university is not a party-place and some kind of a dress code seems to be necessary there.
Besides, wearing student’s uniform is very important when the question of different social classes is taken into consideration. Those children whose parents are not so wealthy as, for instance, their classmates’ may feel themselves not equal being unable to wear the same expensive clothes and this may cause a big problem in the development of their personalities.
On the other hand, it is hard not to agree with those people who consider a uniform a thing that makes every student so similar to each other that it is hard to find an individual character in this crowd. But, at the same time, it is not usually a uniform that prevents a person from the development of his character; it is more often his own preference to make a school wearing guilty for his bad temper and the lack of individuality.
To sum up, I would like to say that wearing a uniform should rather be necessary at school but it is in our power to make it appropriate and not dull or undesirable to wear.
Только начала готовиться, кажется еще не совсем понимаю структуру. Очень хочется услышать мнение более опытных в этом вопросе людей!
Заранее большое спасибо!
Буду очень благодарна если поможете с оценкой примерно вот такого эссе:
Some schools ask the students to wear the students uniforms. Some think it has some disadvantages to the development of the students' characters. Do you agree or disagree? Give the reasons for your reasons.
It is quite common nowadays that many schools demand wearing a uniform from their students. And it is evident that at the same time that not every student enjoys having it on and, moreover, there are some who think it may be not only just uncomfortable but even dangerous for a young individual’s character. In my opinion, wearing a school uniform seems not to have anything common with the development of a person’s character and, in the contrary, may even help to make children more disciplined and socially organized. Let me explain why.
Firstly, such thing as a uniform helps better consider the seriousness of the process of study. A university is not a party-place and some kind of a dress code seems to be necessary there.
Besides, wearing student’s uniform is very important when the question of different social classes is taken into consideration. Those children whose parents are not so wealthy as, for instance, their classmates’ may feel themselves not equal being unable to wear the same expensive clothes and this may cause a big problem in the development of their personalities.
On the other hand, it is hard not to agree with those people who consider a uniform a thing that makes every student so similar to each other that it is hard to find an individual character in this crowd. But, at the same time, it is not usually a uniform that prevents a person from the development of his character; it is more often his own preference to make a school wearing guilty for his bad temper and the lack of individuality.
To sum up, I would like to say that wearing a uniform should rather be necessary at school but it is in our power to make it appropriate and not dull or undesirable to wear.
Только начала готовиться, кажется еще не совсем понимаю структуру. Очень хочется услышать мнение более опытных в этом вопросе людей!
Заранее большое спасибо!
спасибо!
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