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[<кирилл>]

All good from the point of view of the use of the required vocab, except for the 'prescriptive teachers' - no idea what this is.

School boys and girls - what's that? And why do you start talking about young employees straight after that? What do you mean and what's the link? (coherence problems)

changes to in the given context: changes on, in or to? | Grammarly

имел ввиду teacher who use prescriptive methods of teaching

Хотел написать shoolbouys and schoolgirls

Да связь пропущена с young employees
Надо было написать что-то типа thereby , when they grow up, they will Not be as creative as ...

[Maimiti_Isabella]

These days, many people are concerned about school education, which affects everyone from the cradle to the grave. They often claim that the modern marks oriented school system is outdated and requires some drastic changes. Teacher oriented methods of teaching, for instance, decrease creativity of school boys and girls. Thereby, young employees are not as creative as rapidly changing environment demands them to be , as a result of which they could face some problems in the workplace. Unsurprisingly, most of prescriptive teachers are vehemently against any changes in the educational system. However , schools ought to respond to rapidly changing environment, by switching to child oriented approach, which will undoubtedly benefit both employers and employees.

All good from the point of view of the use of the required vocab, except for the 'prescriptive teachers' - no idea what this is.

School boys and girls - what's that? And why do you start talking about young employees straight after that? What do you mean and what's the link? (coherence problems)

changes to in the given context: changes on, in or to? | Grammarly

[Maimiti_Isabella]

In today’s world, there are different educational methods were adopted by educators. A marks-oriented and a teacher-oriented approaches are two main of them. In spite of some advantages of both conceptions, they faced vehement criticism from many people.

First of all, a teacher-oriented approach considered as an outdated way of schooling. The main reason why this prescriptive method is attacked is that it stifles creativity in students. Teachers do not lead pupils to knowledge but enforce it. This means that young people do not have an opportunity to explore new horizons of science.

A marks-oriented approach also has some drawbacks. The main one is that this method does not respond to rapidly changing environment. In order to gain good marks, many students prefer to execute easy tasks rather than to solve difficult ones and lose their good marks. Consequently, these studetns cannot become professionals and deal with current environmental problems.

In conclusion, from my perspective, despite a conception adopted in a particular school or university, students have to adore a subject they have chosen to study and keep on loving it from cradle to grave.

All the 'prescribed' words seem to have been used correctly. No problems here.

.. there are different educational methods were adopted by educators. - What's this?!

And I don't care what you'll manage to google but if I see 'the main reason why' ever again, I'm not going to read your writing!

horizons of science - why science? It hasn't been mentioned before. And it's not mentioned afterwards. Hence, coherence issues.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

There is an opinion that the actual educational system is obsolete and needs to be adjusted to respond to modern rapidly changing environments. From the cradle to the grave, education is part and parcel throughout our life, hence it is very important the way we approach to teaching knowledge. Many people consider teacher centred approach outdated and excessively adult oriented. They vehemently believe that this approach neglect the need and interest of children, thus limiting their creativity. Additionally the actual educational system lacks of a balanced assessment mechanism, the marks oriented assessment of material assimilation is just an indirect measure of children's time management and does not directly assure of knowledge gained.
On the other hand, teachers think that the government' educational guidelines are too prescriptive, limiting them from trying new innovative approach in order to face current educational challenges.

vehemently - проверьте значение и употребление.
и я совсем не поняла идею про adult oriented approach
marks oriented assessment of material assimilation - это тоже для меня загадка.

Вам просто необходимо разобраться с запытыми в выделенных предложениях.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Можно примеры некорректного использования? Чтобы не остались умные слова мертвым грузом.

Там с предлогами проблема. А примеры приводить не буду. Эти слова не являются ни широко ни даже узкоупотребляемыми в английском языке. В качестве доказательства можете посмотреть в BNC (British national Corpus). British National Corpus (BYU-BNC)
Слово acquiesce встречается аж 64 раза! Там и примеры посмотрите.

[od1n]

Все 'заданные' слова - никаких проблем. Но вы нахватались 'умных' слов, а вот как они 'работают в предложении - это беда.

Можно примеры некорректного использования? Чтобы не остались умные слова мертвым грузом.

Check out prepositions.

Got it

Также я не поняла, куда запятая делась после however и As a consequence ...

Забыл поставить. Так-то про вводные слова знаю.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Nowadays an education system of any developed country is a hot topic of interminable controversies.

One of the most blameful problem is an outdated educational program in tertiary education. Todays teachers face a rapidly changing environment that prompted them to keep their knowledge up-to-date.
However many of them acquiesce with a fast-paced development of the corresponding field of science and intentionally ignore any possibility to renovate their background. Step by step it turns into education by obsolete rules in a prescriptive manner. As a consequence many students vehemently oppose to such circumstances.

Another critical problem is marks-oriented education. Some parents blame it in suppressing of children creativity. Stating that it is a good habit to learn from cradle to grave, they also contravenes with a widespread teacher-centred style of education. In most cases it is a considerable reason for them to respond with home-schooling of their children.

Все 'заданные' слова - никаких проблем. Но вы нахватались 'умных' слов, а вот как они 'работают в предложении - это беда. Check out prepositions.

Также я не поняла, куда запятая делась после however и As a consequence ...

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Great attention is devoted to education in our days. It influences human life from cradle to grave, that is why it is so important part of our life. Currently development of society and technology is accelerated, and this development affects education. In addition, a rapidly changing social environment does matter. Current educational methods become outdated and new modern methods appear. For example, there are people who vehemently object to teacher centred education. They usually support student-centered instruction. These types of education have both positive and negative sides.

In teacher centred education, the teacher talks or give prescription while the students listen. In this case, the students work alone, they learn to be independent. However, this type of education is marks oriented and do not learn to collaborate with other people.

In student-centered instruction, the students communicate with each other. They develop creativity and improve collaborative skills, the students ask questions and the instructor responds to their questions. This type of education prepares the student for adult life. When they face with problems, they will be able to solve them.

только 2 слова из списка употреблены неправильно.
prescriptive и prescription совершенно разные вещи в данном контексте
глагол face является transitive

It influences human life from cradle to grave, that is why it is so important part of our life. - что у нас здесь с пунктуацией произошло?

[vok]

Existing in the digital era and rapidly changing environment the education system has fallen behind with its dated approach. Due to the prescriptive teaching methods pupils mainly show their creativity while cheating on a test in order to be praised by marks oriented education system afterwards. As a result, the illicit skill acquired during the formative years is used from cradle to grave.
Students-centred learning may solve the problem that we face. The method provokes learners to be an active part of studying and personalised responses are encouraged. Unfortunately, despite vehemently opposition, teacher-centred education is still a priority.

[Тина]

The majority of little children, who just went to the first class in Ukraine face the problem of marks-oriented education system. Ten years ago we have been studied by another educarional srandards which are outdated now. Every child in our country has a prescriptive right for free education. However to be got to school, kids, who are just 5 or 6 years old have to show not only their knowledge of reading, writing and mathematics, but also their creativity. To respond to such requierments parents vehemently teach their children from their childhood. Unfortunately the classes for infants are teacher centered and do not give the needed effect. After all thoughtful parents do not give up and make children study more and more. As a consequence nowadays people study from cradle to grave and this is one of the main rules of survival in rapidly changing environment.

[z11aalex]

Sorry guys but nothing is going to happen for the next couple of days. Hopefully, I'll get some breathing time towards the end of the week.

sure, if you need some help with english, just drop a line

[<кирилл>]

Ok , np

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Sorry guys but nothing is going to happen for the next couple of days. Hopefully, I'll get some breathing time towards the end of the week.

[MariaAn]

In the modern world the Educational System faces with difficulties, due to rapidly changing environment.

On the one hand, students do not want to get an outdated knowledge and became marks oriented to have a success career after a graduation.
On the contrary, for teachers, work on the same position from cradle to grave is not popular more. Moreover, business is not teacher centered present time, it vehemently respond to student's needs.

It seems, that prescriptive documents and other learning materials need to be rewrote on a regular basis whereas teachers should conduct a creative lessons.

[NortT]

Maimiti_Isabella, по ходу дела вопрос к вам. Кто-то написал from cradle to grave, кто-то написал с the. Как все-таки правильно? Если следовать тому, что тут обсуждалось, то the не нужно.