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Look how I would write it:
Since their first appeararance about a hundred years ago, advertisments have undergone a lot of changes. Modern advertisments are mone than a simple description of a particular product; it is a little story with its own problem and happy ending. It is a widely popular belief that through advertising people can learn about a country for which it was made.
This introduction starts by mentioning some background information and smothely leads to stating a topic of an essay.
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A piece of advice for you. Don't try to rewrite your essays, you will only lose your time. Instead, analize your mistakes and write a new one without them.
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