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[Maimiti_Isabella]

Мне нравится For many, for instance, it could present a real challenge to adapt to ...

А мне последнее. Но не суть. Просто даже 'передвинув' for instance (или практически любое вводное слово) на место после подлежащего, вы создаете предложение совершенно другого уровня. Естественно, как и во всем другом, надо знать меру.

[MariaAn]

Maimiti_Isabella, и мое чтиво, плиз прокомментриуйте (на пред.стр.)

[julyp]

Похоже меня проглядели.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

When dwellers of rural area relocate to the Big Smoke they want to find an idyllic life. However, some years later, most of them feel themselves disappointed with an utopian idea of better life in megapolises.

On the one hand, living inside a flock of citizens has an uncomfortable conditions such as hustle and bustle everywhere: in shops, in public transport, in hospitals and other instances. Moreover, permanent noise has a negative impact to the nervous system and health in common. This can lead to increasing of DINKs family which is a disadvantage for a whole society. If employee had more opportunities for telecommuting, they would reduce a level of stress and improve their health.

Интересный подход Прямо все наооборот! Нестандартно.

--> rural dwellers

feel themselves - yuk! (just feel is good enough )

flock имеет совсем другое значение

И запомните на всю оставшуюся жизнь этого форума

to impact/affect/influence + object (transitive verbs)
to have (feel, experience, etc) an impact / effect / influence + on

common and general are not synonyms

Остальное комментировать не буду. Ошибок очень много, но они и ожидаемы.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Похоже меня проглядели.

Я знала! Теперь уже позже, если смогу - сегодня. А нет, так будет завтра. Хорошо?

[julyp]

Да

[z11aalex]

Очень неплохо. Практически все слова употреблены правильно. Жалко, что для DINKs место не нашлось.

Проверьте как используется слово incline.
ill health - уже существительное с прилагательным, так что они само по себе самодостаточные
и откуда вы вот эту прелесть взяли: persons?
countryside пишется вместе

Спасибо!

насчет incline мне показалось вроде подходит по смыслу, взято отсюда :incline

насчет ill health можно и так?

... that discourage ill health from the idea ...

persons - вышло как то cumbersome

countryside- basic mistake

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Спасибо!

насчет incline мне показалось вроде подходит по смыслу, взято отсюда :incline

Check the usage!

насчет ill health можно и так?
... that discourage ill health from the idea ...

Nop

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Sea change or tree change gains popularity in our days. People abandon city life and move to villages or sea coasts because there are no hustle and bustle in countryside. In addition, people enjoy peaceful, idyllic or even utopian life in countryside.

Of course, life in a village has minuses, for example, you may have difficulty with job searching. However many people may found telecommuting through the internet. Fewer and fewer circumstances prevent people from moving to the village these days. Everybody can relocate to village or sea cost now: young and old, families with children and DINK families. However, there are two categories of people who usually migrate to countryside. The first category is retirees and ill health people. The second one is people who want to rest from the big smoke; they usually shift to the coast.

Although there is urban sprawl nowadays, this sea change is becoming more popular than ever.

Good ideas but you need to keep working on your English.
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'ill health' is not used correctly

Please re-visit the SVA issues in the 'there is / there are' sentences

Check out the meaning of the verb 'to rest'.

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Are we done?

[z11aalex]

Are we done?

I think so, anyway I am keen to find out what's out there prepared for us

[Maimiti_Isabella]

I think so, anyway I am keen to find out what's out there prepared for us

Nothing as yet. Too busy. Maybe later.

[Тина]

Are we done?

We're looking for another challenge impatiently)

[Maimiti_Isabella]

The topic: education

• dated/ outdated
• marks oriented
• to face
• to respond to
• rapidly changing environment
• prescriptive
• teacher centred / teacher oriented
• vehemently
• creativity
• from cradle to grave

[julyp]

Great attention is devoted to education in our days. It influences human life from cradle to grave, that is why it is so important part of our life. Currently development of society and technology is accelerated, and this development affects education. In addition, a rapidly changing social environment does matter. Current educational methods become outdated and new modern methods appear. For example, there are people who vehemently object to teacher centred education. They usually support student-centered instruction. These types of education have both positive and negative sides.

In teacher centred education, the teacher talks or give prescription while the students listen. In this case, the students work alone, they learn to be independent. However, this type of education is marks oriented and do not learn to collaborate with other people.

In student-centered instruction, the students communicate with each other. They develop creativity and improve collaborative skills, the students ask questions and the instructor responds to their questions. This type of education prepares the student for adult life. When they face with problems, they will be able to solve them.