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Здравствуйте. Я склоняю голову перед вами,редактирующими наши эссе- на русско-английской смеси выражений. С таким упорством и регулярностью вы исправляете все те же ошибки. Я сдавала IELTS 4 раза в течение последних 2 лет и,кажется, уже совсем не имею надежды на необходимые как воздух 7-7-7-7. Такие жуткие колебания- с 5.5 на 7 и обратно на 6 в writing, когда Listening and Reading стабильно на 7.5. Даже умудрилась получить 7.5 за Speaking, но Writing вечно подводит. Посмотрите мое эссе, оцените и дайте рекомендации к дальнейшей работе,пожалуйста.
Topic-
Many people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Discribe advantages and disadvantages of renting.
My answer-
There is a modern tendency observed worldwide to live in rented houses, which seems suit for a great number of people nowadays.Although, I personally feel it is always better to live in your own home, there are many reasons for taking some temporarial place to live in.
First of all, there are economical reasons for taking some home for rent, like saving money on a current restorations, repainting or improovements-all of these great bills in most cases are in responsibility of home owner, not visitors. Futhermore, it is impossible for foreign students to buy private home to a short period of time during their studies abroad, so they prefer to rent. Adding more, you will certainly escape any loss during natural disasters which mostly target people’s properties( in a case you have managed to survive ).
Secondly, I can understand a great convenience in renting some home for others , because so they would have a chance to choose a place to live easily or adjust it more near to their current jobs, so, again, save money on transport’s expencives.At last, it is very easy to qiute some present location and change it for other one when you strongly dislike your neigbours or feel the place for living does not in harmony with your status anymore.
So, I have numbered numerous reasons to take someone's other home for a rent. Nevertheless, owning your personal appartaments would always preferred for everyone if can suite to a pocket. I have lived for a long time in a rented house, so remember this uncomfortable feeling of homelessness and a permanent stress and fear to be asked to find some other accomodation to live any time. Moreover, in case you have your children, all their wallpaintings, small destructions would be on your head all the time. So , you never feel relaxed about it. At last, most of owners put restrictions on some decorating details or innovational changes for new comers. What is a pitty! And as an ever last point, it is quite unacceptable for me to live in someone other’s home like to sleep in someone other’s bed.
To sum up, I agree, there are many advantages in taking house for rent, but whenever it suit a pocket, I think, just everyone would choose to live in his own appartaments rather to rent.
Topic-
Many people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Discribe advantages and disadvantages of renting.
My answer-
There is a modern tendency observed worldwide to live in rented houses, which seems suit for a great number of people nowadays.Although, I personally feel it is always better to live in your own home, there are many reasons for taking some temporarial place to live in.
First of all, there are economical reasons for taking some home for rent, like saving money on a current restorations, repainting or improovements-all of these great bills in most cases are in responsibility of home owner, not visitors. Futhermore, it is impossible for foreign students to buy private home to a short period of time during their studies abroad, so they prefer to rent. Adding more, you will certainly escape any loss during natural disasters which mostly target people’s properties( in a case you have managed to survive ).
Secondly, I can understand a great convenience in renting some home for others , because so they would have a chance to choose a place to live easily or adjust it more near to their current jobs, so, again, save money on transport’s expencives.At last, it is very easy to qiute some present location and change it for other one when you strongly dislike your neigbours or feel the place for living does not in harmony with your status anymore.
So, I have numbered numerous reasons to take someone's other home for a rent. Nevertheless, owning your personal appartaments would always preferred for everyone if can suite to a pocket. I have lived for a long time in a rented house, so remember this uncomfortable feeling of homelessness and a permanent stress and fear to be asked to find some other accomodation to live any time. Moreover, in case you have your children, all their wallpaintings, small destructions would be on your head all the time. So , you never feel relaxed about it. At last, most of owners put restrictions on some decorating details or innovational changes for new comers. What is a pitty! And as an ever last point, it is quite unacceptable for me to live in someone other’s home like to sleep in someone other’s bed.
To sum up, I agree, there are many advantages in taking house for rent, but whenever it suit a pocket, I think, just everyone would choose to live in his own appartaments rather to rent.
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