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Вы сочетаете вечерние учебные курсы с полным рабочим днем и поняли, что дальше учиться не можете. Написать письмо тьютору с объяснением ситуации.
Dear Mr. Petrov,
I am writing to you to tell you, that I can not continue studying at your evening courses.
First of all I should like to thank you for organizing your evening courses, they are interesting and useful at the same time. I should like to thank you again for providing me with possibility to attend these courses.
Your courses begin at 7 p.m. as they are specially organized for working people. Unfortunately now workers of many companies can not finish their work at 6 p.m. as thy used to do before the crisis. Our company faced decrease of profit, thus it had to decline the quantity of its employees. Before the crisis there were 12 employees in our division, now 4 of them are fired and thereby 8 employees, who are still working, have to stay in the evenings in order to finish the work.
I am really upset that I can not attend your courses any more, because now my working day usually finishes an 8 p.m. and the situation on the labor market prevent me from claiming our chief to comply with the terms of labor agreement, that establishes the end of the working day at 6 p.m.
I am very grateful to you for organizing such informative and focused on practice courses, that can be attended by working people. I do believe that I shall be able to continue visiting your courses in the future.
Sincerely yours,
Ivanova Anna
Во многих странах запрещено содержание домашних животных в квартире. Правильно это или нет?
In many countries keeping pets in flats is prohibited. Many citizens of such countries suppose that this is not fair and that their rights are unduly restricted. It seems to me, that there is no simple answer to the question whether people should be allowed to keep pets in their flats, because conditions of living in the flats differ and possibility to keep a pet depends on these conditions.
First of all people loving pets are sure, that living with pets is better than living without pets. Pets are friends that are always ay your disposal, sometimes they are the only friends of lonely people. Simultaneously most of the people wanting to keep pets suppose that they have to respect needs and wishes of pets. I am sure that neighbours of the people keeping pets shall be included in the number of those, whose interests shall be taken into account.
Then hosts of the flats often declare that their pets are happy, because they live with men and women loving them. In many cases they are right, but there are always exceptions. Although many people suppose, that “all you need is love”, it is only the part of the truth, in fact people and pets need food and territory as well, besides many pets especially some breeds of dogs need physical activity. Basic needs of food and some territory are usually satisfied, but need of physical activity is often neglected. When a dog lives in a private house, it can use backyard for playing and other activities, when its host / hostess is out of the house. A dog living in a flat can only walk with its host / hostess and very often such walks are too short. As a result deprivation of physical activity makes dogs nervous and unhappy.
People keeping pets in flats suppose that their flats belong to them and they can do what they want on their own territory. They are right, especially when they keep such pets as fishes and parrots, but when people keep cats and especially dogs, their neighbours are often involved in lives of these pets whether they like it or not. Cats in heat and dogs, when they are bored or upset, can be very loud. Neighbours are often displeased by sounds produced by pets. The only way to avoid such situation is good walls between flats that can not be penetrated by the sounds produced by pets. But most of houses are not provided with soundproof walls.
In conclusion I should like to say, that in my opinion pets should be allowed to be kept in flats only on conditions, that all needs of pets including need of physical activity are satisfied and that the rights of neighbours of people having pets are respected as well. In all other cases keeping pets in flats should be prohibited, because rights of other people (neighbours) are quite as important as rights of people wanting to keep a pet. Rights of pets to satisfy their basic needs shall also be taken into consideration.
Вы сочетаете вечерние учебные курсы с полным рабочим днем и поняли, что дальше учиться не можете. Написать письмо тьютору с объяснением ситуации.
Dear Mr. Petrov,
I am writing to you to tell you, that I can not continue studying at your evening courses.
First of all I should like to thank you for organizing your evening courses, they are interesting and useful at the same time. I should like to thank you again for providing me with possibility to attend these courses.
Your courses begin at 7 p.m. as they are specially organized for working people. Unfortunately now workers of many companies can not finish their work at 6 p.m. as thy used to do before the crisis. Our company faced decrease of profit, thus it had to decline the quantity of its employees. Before the crisis there were 12 employees in our division, now 4 of them are fired and thereby 8 employees, who are still working, have to stay in the evenings in order to finish the work.
I am really upset that I can not attend your courses any more, because now my working day usually finishes an 8 p.m. and the situation on the labor market prevent me from claiming our chief to comply with the terms of labor agreement, that establishes the end of the working day at 6 p.m.
I am very grateful to you for organizing such informative and focused on practice courses, that can be attended by working people. I do believe that I shall be able to continue visiting your courses in the future.
Sincerely yours,
Ivanova Anna
Во многих странах запрещено содержание домашних животных в квартире. Правильно это или нет?
In many countries keeping pets in flats is prohibited. Many citizens of such countries suppose that this is not fair and that their rights are unduly restricted. It seems to me, that there is no simple answer to the question whether people should be allowed to keep pets in their flats, because conditions of living in the flats differ and possibility to keep a pet depends on these conditions.
First of all people loving pets are sure, that living with pets is better than living without pets. Pets are friends that are always ay your disposal, sometimes they are the only friends of lonely people. Simultaneously most of the people wanting to keep pets suppose that they have to respect needs and wishes of pets. I am sure that neighbours of the people keeping pets shall be included in the number of those, whose interests shall be taken into account.
Then hosts of the flats often declare that their pets are happy, because they live with men and women loving them. In many cases they are right, but there are always exceptions. Although many people suppose, that “all you need is love”, it is only the part of the truth, in fact people and pets need food and territory as well, besides many pets especially some breeds of dogs need physical activity. Basic needs of food and some territory are usually satisfied, but need of physical activity is often neglected. When a dog lives in a private house, it can use backyard for playing and other activities, when its host / hostess is out of the house. A dog living in a flat can only walk with its host / hostess and very often such walks are too short. As a result deprivation of physical activity makes dogs nervous and unhappy.
People keeping pets in flats suppose that their flats belong to them and they can do what they want on their own territory. They are right, especially when they keep such pets as fishes and parrots, but when people keep cats and especially dogs, their neighbours are often involved in lives of these pets whether they like it or not. Cats in heat and dogs, when they are bored or upset, can be very loud. Neighbours are often displeased by sounds produced by pets. The only way to avoid such situation is good walls between flats that can not be penetrated by the sounds produced by pets. But most of houses are not provided with soundproof walls.
In conclusion I should like to say, that in my opinion pets should be allowed to be kept in flats only on conditions, that all needs of pets including need of physical activity are satisfied and that the rights of neighbours of people having pets are respected as well. In all other cases keeping pets in flats should be prohibited, because rights of other people (neighbours) are quite as important as rights of people wanting to keep a pet. Rights of pets to satisfy their basic needs shall also be taken into consideration.
now workers of many companies (9) can not finish their work at 6 p.m. as thy used to (10) do before the crisis. Our company faced (11) decrease of profit, (12) thus it had to (13) decline the quantity of its employees. Before the crisis there were 12 employees in our division, now 4 of them (14) are fired and (15) thereby 8 employees, who are still working, have to (16) stay in the evenings in order to finish the work.
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