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It is undoubtedly true, that transportation substantially influences air contamination caused by the rising number of vehicles _ and some people believe, that in order to reduce traffic and pollution issues, petrol prices should be soared. This essay will discuss arguments both for and against the increase of petrol cost and suggest some efficient measures, which can be taken to tackle with this problem.
To a certain extent, I agree that the rise of petrol cost may lead to the reduction of ___ vehicles on the streets. If the prices of fuel are not affordable to the upper and middle layers of society, the majority of citizens will commute by the public transport. Consequently, the decrease in the number of private cars may dramatically improve traffic issues as well as pollution problems related to transport. On the other hand, when the cost of petrol soar, it affects the prices of goods delivered by trucks from nearby regions. Subsequently, this measure may cause significant social dissatisfaction.
The best ways to solve the issue with traffic and pollution would be to forbid the use of private cars on daily basics and to provide citizens with free bicycles. The spectacular effect of these measures can be illustrated by an example of Beijing city - откуда city?, where it is allowed to drive vehicles with even number only on even days of the week. Meantime, the authorities established the special venues where any commuter can borrow the bicycle and return it in other place next to his or her destination afterwards.
In conclusion, governments should tackle the traffic and air contamination problems by the reduction of vehicles on the streets as well as by providing citizens with bicycles. If these measures are taken, the pollution caused by the number of cars will shrink dramatically.
To a certain extent, I agree that the rise of petrol cost may lead to the reduction of ___ vehicles on the streets. If the prices of fuel are not affordable to the upper and middle layers of society, the majority of citizens will commute by the public transport. Consequently, the decrease in the number of private cars may dramatically improve traffic issues as well as pollution problems related to transport. On the other hand, when the cost of petrol soar, it affects the prices of goods delivered by trucks from nearby regions. Subsequently, this measure may cause significant social dissatisfaction.
The best ways to solve the issue with traffic and pollution would be to forbid the use of private cars on daily basics and to provide citizens with free bicycles. The spectacular effect of these measures can be illustrated by an example of Beijing city - откуда city?, where it is allowed to drive vehicles with even number only on even days of the week. Meantime, the authorities established the special venues where any commuter can borrow the bicycle and return it in other place next to his or her destination afterwards.
In conclusion, governments should tackle the traffic and air contamination problems by the reduction of vehicles on the streets as well as by providing citizens with bicycles. If these measures are taken, the pollution caused by the number of cars will shrink dramatically.
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