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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays questions of a little parent’s attention for own children is one of the most important issues for modern society. Many people believe that the modern lifestyles allow educating child without huge attention and young generation can to prepare for adult life themselves. Herewith, the basic parent’s aim is to earn money for their scions. Whereas other peoples are of the opinion that kids are in need of attention, especially tenderness, care and help. In this essay I will explore both points of view and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, extra care of parents is the reason of the great children’s dependency. For example, according to recent trend in Russian families, young people can’t make decision independently. Moreover it is very hard to get enough money for just married persons nowadays. For this reason it is clear that the child, who progressed without too much tutelage, become stronger.
On the other hand, Young, to becoming a worthy citizen, must receive much attention from older people. For instance, good games supervised by the parents makes the child benevolent. Therefore it is obvious that fighting-games and modern street culture are the causes of a dangerous and anti-social behavior of teenagers.
Considering everything mentioned above it is clearly seen that there is no one solution of this problem. The both points of view are important in modern society. In my opinion, the young people are in not depending only on fosterage, but mostly on their traits. We must understand that together with money and education child wait attention, tenderness and simple love from their most important persons.
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За шаблон спасибо vnikitin
Спасибо огромное, что читаете мое эссе и низкий поклон за комментарии!!!
Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays questions of a little parent’s attention for own children is one of the most important issues for modern society. Many people believe that the modern lifestyles allow educating child without huge attention and young generation can to prepare for adult life themselves. Herewith, the basic parent’s aim is to earn money for their scions. Whereas other peoples are of the opinion that kids are in need of attention, especially tenderness, care and help. In this essay I will explore both points of view and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, extra care of parents is the reason of the great children’s dependency. For example, according to recent trend in Russian families, young people can’t make decision independently. Moreover it is very hard to get enough money for just married persons nowadays. For this reason it is clear that the child, who progressed without too much tutelage, become stronger.
On the other hand, Young, to becoming a worthy citizen, must receive much attention from older people. For instance, good games supervised by the parents makes the child benevolent. Therefore it is obvious that fighting-games and modern street culture are the causes of a dangerous and anti-social behavior of teenagers.
Considering everything mentioned above it is clearly seen that there is no one solution of this problem. The both points of view are important in modern society. In my opinion, the young people are in not depending only on fosterage, but mostly on their traits. We must understand that together with money and education child wait attention, tenderness and simple love from their most important persons.
(275 words) 104/171
За шаблон спасибо vnikitin
, то тогда можно и Chinglish с Konglish_ом подучить 
, но сроки у меня минимальные (всего 2 месяца для подготовки) и нужно прыгнуть выше головы, может посоветуете что-то более конкретное, например, какие-то курсы или педагога 
Ну и, конечно, мнение многоуважаемой Maimiti_Isabella очень интересно
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