Пришла моя очередь просить о помощи в проверке.
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Пожалуйста, если есть возможность, покритикуйте моё творение и дайте советов.
Задание взято из одной из книг по подготовке к IELTS.
You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you.
Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter
explain where the place was and how you got there,
describe what you saw,
offer to take your friend there.
Dear Lisa,
How are you? How are things going? I hope everything is fine.
I must tell you about a new shopping moll I have visited. It is situated near the Central train station. I was there last week with my colleague. We got there by chance since we was near by at that day for business.
It is a new shopping moll with a lot of different boutiques. It is a really huge and built in a modern style. There are many places in the moll for eating out as well. Moreover, there is a skating-rink on the last floor. To tell you the truth, I highly impressed by the moll.
Why don't we go shopping this weekend there? We can buy New Year Gifts for all relatives and friends and visit a lovely restaurant for a good meal and evening.
I hope you will write me back soon.
If you have some questions about the moll and my suggestion please phone me.
Beat regards,
Ulya
Слов - 168.
Недавна начала готовиться к формату экзамена.
Пожалуйста, если есть возможность, покритикуйте моё творение и дайте советов.
Задание взято из одной из книг по подготовке к IELTS.
You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you.
Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter
explain where the place was and how you got there,
describe what you saw,
offer to take your friend there.
Dear Lisa,
How are you? How are things going? I hope everything is fine.
I must tell you about a new shopping moll I have visited. It is situated near the Central train station. I was there last week with my colleague. We got there by chance since we was near by at that day for business.
It is a new shopping moll with a lot of different boutiques. It is a really huge and built in a modern style. There are many places in the moll for eating out as well. Moreover, there is a skating-rink on the last floor. To tell you the truth, I highly impressed by the moll.
Why don't we go shopping this weekend there? We can buy New Year Gifts for all relatives and friends and visit a lovely restaurant for a good meal and evening.
I hope you will write me back soon.
If you have some questions about the moll and my suggestion please phone me.
Beat regards,
Ulya
Слов - 168.
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