Проверьте, пожалуйста, и мое essay. Тема: Why preschool education is important?
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Throughout this century the role of preschool education has significantly changed, and the majority of people all over the world believe that these changes are for the better. The preschool education is a highly debated issue among its proponents and opponents: specially those who hold that every child should be sent to kindergarten and our government, who claims for closing all the kindergartens in order to save their expenses. Personally, I think that this issue is a very important one, as preschool education is very helpful in the full development of the child as a social being and his all-round personality.
Firstly, the development in the early ages enriches the horizon and the outlook of a child, which would be very useful in creating a productive human being in the society. Secondly, it gives more chances for developing his mental and physical potential. Furthermore, not all the parents have the means and time as needed for educating and training their children in the formative years. Recently the research has also very clearly shown, that children are more likely to develop fully in the age of 3-5 years, than in the school age of 6-10 years, and those who have attended preschool are more broadly educated and socialized, as all their skills are opened already and to some extent well-developed. As a result the kids attending kindergartens are expected to know different skills and to experience numerous vital tasks and situations, which their future studies and their existence, in general, will demand.
Additionally, It is a well-known fact that preschool establishments help to expand social skills skills. Moreover, preschool education teaches children how to behave themselves in a group and the society; that is how to become civilized human beings. To start with, it is necessary to point out the fact, that if the child goes to the kindergarten it will be be of great help for him in the future process of socialization. Common activities like chatting with other children, playing different games lead to the enhancement of the sense of collective responsibility. Furthermore, the friendly atmosphere/surrounding induces/introduces warm feelings about fellow beings such as friendship, tolerance, sympathy and cooperation among many others. An example to the point was well illustrated in one of the shows I happened to see on TV not long ago. It was about the discovery of one girl who was kept at home without preschool education. This kid lived with her parents, who had neither enough time nor necessary desire to bring her along as a strong-minded human being. Consequently, she failed to adapt to the society, had no co-operational skills and during the whole life felt herself alone.
However, despite the fact that millions of people all over he world agree that preschool training is of vital essence for the humankind, the government believe that there are more burning questions such as pollution, famine and etc, on which the budget money should be spent. But my opinion differs greatly, from my point of view, at the federal level, the government should make it a law that every child should enter preschool and also create free preschools available to all families.
Taking all these points into consideration, I would like to sum up that education, especially the preschool one, in all its aspects is the item number one in any society, which has settled the certain aim to form a true and an all-round personality. These are not only lofty words, it could be proved by that fact that children are our future and it depends only on them whether will it be light or a dark one.
и на какой band score оно может пртендовать?
Throughout this century the role of preschool education has significantly changed, and the majority of people all over the world believe that these changes are for the better. The preschool education is a highly debated issue among its proponents and opponents: specially those who hold that every child should be sent to kindergarten and our government, who claims for closing all the kindergartens in order to save their expenses. Personally, I think that this issue is a very important one, as preschool education is very helpful in the full development of the child as a social being and his all-round personality.
Firstly, the development in the early ages enriches the horizon and the outlook of a child, which would be very useful in creating a productive human being in the society. Secondly, it gives more chances for developing his mental and physical potential. Furthermore, not all the parents have the means and time as needed for educating and training their children in the formative years. Recently the research has also very clearly shown, that children are more likely to develop fully in the age of 3-5 years, than in the school age of 6-10 years, and those who have attended preschool are more broadly educated and socialized, as all their skills are opened already and to some extent well-developed. As a result the kids attending kindergartens are expected to know different skills and to experience numerous vital tasks and situations, which their future studies and their existence, in general, will demand.
Additionally, It is a well-known fact that preschool establishments help to expand social skills skills. Moreover, preschool education teaches children how to behave themselves in a group and the society; that is how to become civilized human beings. To start with, it is necessary to point out the fact, that if the child goes to the kindergarten it will be be of great help for him in the future process of socialization. Common activities like chatting with other children, playing different games lead to the enhancement of the sense of collective responsibility. Furthermore, the friendly atmosphere/surrounding induces/introduces warm feelings about fellow beings such as friendship, tolerance, sympathy and cooperation among many others. An example to the point was well illustrated in one of the shows I happened to see on TV not long ago. It was about the discovery of one girl who was kept at home without preschool education. This kid lived with her parents, who had neither enough time nor necessary desire to bring her along as a strong-minded human being. Consequently, she failed to adapt to the society, had no co-operational skills and during the whole life felt herself alone.
However, despite the fact that millions of people all over he world agree that preschool training is of vital essence for the humankind, the government believe that there are more burning questions such as pollution, famine and etc, on which the budget money should be spent. But my opinion differs greatly, from my point of view, at the federal level, the government should make it a law that every child should enter preschool and also create free preschools available to all families.
Taking all these points into consideration, I would like to sum up that education, especially the preschool one, in all its aspects is the item number one in any society, which has settled the certain aim to form a true and an all-round personality. These are not only lofty words, it could be proved by that fact that children are our future and it depends only on them whether will it be light or a dark one.
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