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Буду благодарна за корректировки и замечания. И кроме того хотелось бы понять на какой уровень балов это тянет. Спасибо
Ecological balance is impossible to achieve when technological progress constantly ruins our environment.
Do you agree?
Currently the human race has started to face the consequences of the technical progress that was developing rapidly for the last two centuries. Humankind was so carried away with the benefits of technological advances that didn’t pay attention to the environment.
Our philosophy and speed of life force us to get more profit from nature quickly. This unwise policy of using natural resources gives raise to their depletion. Many of the oil, coal and natural gas fields are almost exhausted now. Many countries are trying to build their national wealth by expanding different industries. Most of the time they sacrifice nature for progress.Waste products pollute the land, rivers and air.
Dramatic growth of human population increases needs for resources. People need more food, water, machines and places to live. Intensive farming exhausts the soil. Trying to get more land for farming people destroy forests. In order to protect crops and to increase the productivity farmers use pesticides and herbicides, which have a bad effect on natural balance. People have to build more factories to produce more goods to satisfy growing needs. Most of these factories are not nature friendly. Big cities all over the world are overcrowded. The air in the most of them is polluted with car exhaust fumes.
In summery, it’s obvious that we cannot continue our technological progress the way we did it before. It would be as stupid as sawing off the brough on which we are sitting. We need to find the way to use more eco-friendly technologies and use the natural resourses more carefully.
Буду благодарна за корректировки и замечания. И кроме того хотелось бы понять на какой уровень балов это тянет. Спасибо
Ecological balance is impossible to achieve when technological progress constantly ruins our environment.
Do you agree?
Currently the human race has started to face the consequences of the technical progress that was developing rapidly for the last two centuries. Humankind was so carried away with the benefits of technological advances that didn’t pay attention to the environment.
Our philosophy and speed of life force us to get more profit from nature quickly. This unwise policy of using natural resources gives raise to their depletion. Many of the oil, coal and natural gas fields are almost exhausted now. Many countries are trying to build their national wealth by expanding different industries. Most of the time they sacrifice nature for progress.Waste products pollute the land, rivers and air.
Dramatic growth of human population increases needs for resources. People need more food, water, machines and places to live. Intensive farming exhausts the soil. Trying to get more land for farming people destroy forests. In order to protect crops and to increase the productivity farmers use pesticides and herbicides, which have a bad effect on natural balance. People have to build more factories to produce more goods to satisfy growing needs. Most of these factories are not nature friendly. Big cities all over the world are overcrowded. The air in the most of them is polluted with car exhaust fumes.
In summery, it’s obvious that we cannot continue our technological progress the way we did it before. It would be as stupid as sawing off the brough on which we are sitting. We need to find the way to use more eco-friendly technologies and use the natural resourses more carefully.
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