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Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, эссе моего мужа. Как вы думаете, на сколько потянет? Спасибо.
Environment degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem? And what can we do to prevent it
The burning problem of nowadays is an environmental pollution. Barely a hundred years ago had people never thought about this problem, however, today humanity face with threatening of extinction of animals and forest. All of these problems are result humans activities. Perhaps, future generation will have much worse problems if we do not do all for prevent the worsening situation. In my essay I try to make an attempt to face some of the problems and also find the solutions.
The first problem which should be obligatory mentioned is air pollution. Plants burn the fossil fuel emitting into air a lot of gases which people breathe in. Cars engines pump into the atmosphere carbon dioxide which provides a greenhouse effect. The second problem is a water contaminating. Chemical industry plants pour poisoned water into rivers and lakes, unfortunately, forgetting that the water is a base of life in our planet.
All of environmental problems mentioned above have an awful effect. Polluted air provides us a greenhouse effect and global warming that is a cause of melting planet ice cup. Acid rains destroy plants and have harmful effect to animal and human skin. Contaminating water may be as cause of dangerous diseases and extinction of rare animals.
In conclusion, I would like to say that we are living on fascinating planet and we should appreciate all that we have from the Earth. We, as humans, have inherited the earth that does not mean we can do whatever we like with it. We must save our planet for future generations before too late.
Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, эссе моего мужа. Как вы думаете, на сколько потянет? Спасибо.
Environment degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem? And what can we do to prevent it
The burning problem of nowadays is an environmental pollution. Barely a hundred years ago had people never thought about this problem, however, today humanity face with threatening of extinction of animals and forest. All of these problems are result humans activities. Perhaps, future generation will have much worse problems if we do not do all for prevent the worsening situation. In my essay I try to make an attempt to face some of the problems and also find the solutions.
The first problem which should be obligatory mentioned is air pollution. Plants burn the fossil fuel emitting into air a lot of gases which people breathe in. Cars engines pump into the atmosphere carbon dioxide which provides a greenhouse effect. The second problem is a water contaminating. Chemical industry plants pour poisoned water into rivers and lakes, unfortunately, forgetting that the water is a base of life in our planet.
All of environmental problems mentioned above have an awful effect. Polluted air provides us a greenhouse effect and global warming that is a cause of melting planet ice cup. Acid rains destroy plants and have harmful effect to animal and human skin. Contaminating water may be as cause of dangerous diseases and extinction of rare animals.
In conclusion, I would like to say that we are living on fascinating planet and we should appreciate all that we have from the Earth. We, as humans, have inherited the earth that does not mean we can do whatever we like with it. We must save our planet for future generations before too late.
all for prevent the worsening situation. In my essay I try to make an attempt (9) to face some of the problems and also find the solutions. 
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